A Song for Connie(jeskola buzz remake final)

Started by Casper AudioGhost, December 20, 2009, 11:56:08 AM

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Casper AudioGhost

this is the best song i have ever written-originally on m2k/music generator ps1-now it has come full circle with my buzz remake which i feel is the best work i have done so far-please comment constructive criticism is invited on this   casper
just replaced mp3 with new one reducing echo on lead string i noticed i had too much now it's good :)
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.:DJ Droppin:.

The intro.... is so clean and I love the touch of reverb....
Beat kicks loud and pure.

Then the first arpy melody plays.
THEN the other arps and those blew me away.
The reverb/panning was pure perfection with them. Those are the arps I crave. It might be my favorite sound (Unsure why?)
1:34 strings.... Beautiful strings too.
1:43-145 for me things stood out even better... that part really stands out to me even as this is the 3rd time I've heard this song now.

Love the arrangement with strings (Perhaps they could be a touch louder?) but if your aim was for more subtle strings then there isn't a problem.

Outstanding song. A work of art much more complex and structured I feel than other songs.
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Casper AudioGhost

RIP Marna Patterson (1947-2009) i love you mom,my music is for you:)
my net label http://www.archive.org/details/white-trash-poptronica
www.showcaseyourmusic.com/audioghost 57 tracks
www.myspace.com/audioghost
www.jamwave.com/audioghost
www.youtube.com/casperr37
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Sacred Virgo

i have to say i'm not that surprised about the qualities of this song, as imo it features all the typical characteristics of your previous ones: 1 an extremely good lead melody (which in this case is more epic than usual) and lots emotion to it 2 a minimal sounding arrangement (a bit too minimal for my tastes, but as nak says it's just a matter of personal choices) 3 minor flaws concerning volume levels (i'd say the arps here are a bit loud).

all in all this is definitely a good song, with a huge potential, one of those songs i'd like to remake one day.

Casper AudioGhost

RIP Marna Patterson (1947-2009) i love you mom,my music is for you:)
my net label http://www.archive.org/details/white-trash-poptronica
www.showcaseyourmusic.com/audioghost 57 tracks
www.myspace.com/audioghost
www.jamwave.com/audioghost
www.youtube.com/casperr37
dj on http://chat.paltalk.com/g2/paltalk/1352831106

DJ Ryznup

Cool intro, and nice beat. Great synth, great arrangement of the melodies and nice pads. Your doing some great stuff on this program.

Great work.
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Casper AudioGhost

thx ryznup-i will be be doing some alternate versions of this track eventually,modifying the lead melody sound i most cases pehaps changing the percussion as well-my girlfriend really liked this new version-i feel it's almost good enough to release on itunes or something but not quite-however i will prolly not ever do that as i believe thjat in this new digital age artists should mostly make money from live personal appearance-anyway the original m2k/mmg version will soon have a creative commons licence and will be universal/author endorsed free to adapt and share    casper
RIP Marna Patterson (1947-2009) i love you mom,my music is for you:)
my net label http://www.archive.org/details/white-trash-poptronica
www.showcaseyourmusic.com/audioghost 57 tracks
www.myspace.com/audioghost
www.jamwave.com/audioghost
www.youtube.com/casperr37
dj on http://chat.paltalk.com/g2/paltalk/1352831106

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