Yeah, hes comin round for a jam session on saturday, gonna try and open my mind up to maybe modifying the pre-made riffs, switching them round and such. If I create what I can on the pre-made ones, hopefully I can do much better with better techniques. Thanks for the welcome lads

thanks man, yeah he used to live in my street, he moved like 2 mins up the road and i sent him some sample lyrics that ild written and he thought they were cool so he asked if ild lyricise some of his other tunes, but he also opened my eyes to creating some good tunes, so i gave it a shot, i think ill try and make another, like a slower one, with the kick drum, try to use some old techiniques and put them together to make a good tune, i do like the occasional trance tunes, so i thought ild open with that, if i can create a good 4 minute tune without it dragging, maybe it will open up to better tunes

Thanks for the comments Quade, Ive heard some of your work before and Im blown away, I gotta be honest so any advice from you is more than welcome

Thanks for the comments guys, I have modified it somewhat, heres the new link tell me what you think, again all opinions are welcome
http://www.savefile.com/files/1984187

Hello Im Steven a.k.a The Lyricist. Im from Manchester and I write the lyrics for DarkBliss. I have just branched out into making tunes myself. Im going to give it a go, see if Im any good at it!

Okay I gave it a shot and created this first track, now bear in mind Im a total newbie so I hope this gets at least a 4/10 rating, its only 2:20 long so constructive criticism would be helpful
http://www.savefile.com/files/1983856

Excellent tune dude, great beat, good anthem